A moment spent alone doing something i enjoyed (English Assignment)

“Please…” I gave the cutest face I could hoping that my mother would give in to me.
My mother agreed to let me play on the computer. My jaw drooped to the floor; it was rare that she would allow me to play after only five minutes of begging. Having completed all my homework, the play time was definitely well deserved. I sat on the comfortable roller chair, laid my sore hand on my silver mouse. Let the gaming commence!
Not even half and hour through, the nagging began.
“Are you sure you have finished doing your homework?”
“Don’t you have something else to do?”
“How long has it been?” My mother’s voice was heard every few minutes. Unable to concentrate on my game, I slammed my laptop’s screen down and stormed off to my room. My moment doing something I enjoyed had ended, one and a half hours earlier. I grabbed the book I was meaning to finish, sprawled on my bed and started reading. Although it was not fun, he certainly was better than the nagging.







This still sucks. =/